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Maggie,
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===My name is Maggie Canelli. My favorite sport is basketball. I am good at math and I enjoy playing video games. I have loved all animals since I was small. I always play basketball outside with my friends. I have little cousins that i love. My little cousin with me played video game together which is fun. I also have a cousin my age who I love to play with. I love all of my family. In my family, I am the only one in my family with long curls. My family call me sweet and i like kidding my family. My cousin call me funny person. My===

===When it comes to being a Basketball player I am best at defense. I have liked basketball from age 6 to 15 years old. I was learn play basketball when i was young. I was older still play basketball because I love basketball that sometime easy play. I want basketball player later also coach team because i know how doing basketball team work togther. I want coach basketball's girls team because i am good know how doing play game basketball. I know my feel love play basketball because i am good player.===

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My name is Maggie Canelli. My favorite sport is basketball. I am good at math and I enjoy playing video games. I have loved all animals since I was small. I always play basketball outside with my friends. I have little cousins that i love kids. My little cousin with me played video game together which is fun. I also have a cousin my age who I love to play with. I love all of my family. In my family, I am the only one in my family with long curls. My families call me sweet and I like kidding my family. My cousins call me funny person. I feel like my family sometime love me but sometimes they leave me out with all their talking. I have a bad temper and occasionally I play too much and too hard. I feel sorry for that. Play fighting is fine but I don’t mean to hurt my brother, sister and cousins. I am enjoy ways chill my cousin play with me going to pools have great time. I like this family fun thing. My family and I are enjoyed and talk quiet.

when it come to... When it comes to being a Basketball player I am best at defense. I have liked basketball from age 6 to 15 years old. I was learning play basketball when I was young. I was older still play basketball because I love basketball that sometime easy play. I want basketball player later also coach team because I know how doing basketball teamwork together. I want coach basketball's girls team because I am good know how doing play game basketball. I know my feel love play basketball because I am good player.

report about kunta Kunta Kinte really was brave. He was successful in manhood training. He ran away two times. 2) He really strong can doing? yes, Kunta Kinte was hard working. He could carry heavy boxes. 3) He not like white people? why? yes, Kunta Kinte did not like white people. The white people beat him and also force him to say his name,Toby. 4) The man want him slave till die ? yes, I think the man try kept kunta kinte was bad ran away from slave also some person don't know that man try ran away again but the man not want kunta kinte to know where going north or any where ways. 5) He did never give -up? yes, kunta kinte was never give-up because he know his life want back to africa but not going in ther he have wif also baby. he trying ran away again thrid time but it not he was sturck he had choose.

** Report about Kunta **

I am interested in Kunta Kinte who lived in the 1700s in West Africa also in America. Americans get African people for slaves. That is a sad story. Here is a summary of what I learned.Later years Kunta Kinte was in America. He learned how to speak English. Also Kunta Kinte really wanted away from slave and he was brave only never give-up. About 8 years later, he was older. He marries later make baby. The baby is girl. Her name is Kizzy.



Kunta Kinte was in Africa and he was kidnapped by other Africans who were working for the slave trade. He was really brave. He was successful in manhood training. He ran away from Fiddler two times. Kunta Kinte was strong and hard working. He could carry heavy boxes. When he was young in Africa, he used a sling to shoot a rock at a lion because lion eat a goat's baby. Kunta Kinte did not like the white people who treated him cruelly. The white people beat him and also force him to change to the new name of Toby. The master wanted 'Toby' to stay a slave until he died. I think the master was bad and so he ran away from slave also some person don't know that master try ran away again but the man not want Kunta Kinte to know where going north or any where ways. Kunta Kinte never gave up. He knew and wanted his life back to Africa but could not go there because he have wife also baby. He almost tried running away again a third time but he chose not to go.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roots:_The_Saga_of_an_American_Family

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= My free write: __My favorite movie__ = =My favorite movies are big mama, car, salt, the rome, The Princess and the Frog and etc. I love this movie comedy also other way too. I was feel love watch movie love because my mom know i only watch comedy and love. I am really crazy girl still because i interesting some new movie but maybe my cousin ask me go to for sleepover for hang out for watch movie new kind things show. I hope new movie is worse comedy than later when i go to home i will tell my family about movie is maybe cool. = =My free write: = =My free write: My favorite music group = =My favorite music group is glee because we are watch on tuesday everyday weeks new way funny show also they sing are great but they are older but fake who teenage look other person thy will sing them. I think so but i was wrong or maybe i am right but if it real person than i am wrong i will fail. My family love glee are woulderful. I like who action mad at cheerleader that was coach is sue really funny her feel is weird. this make me a little laugh. =